![]() Most writers have a favorite book on the craft of writing (mine is definitely Save the Cat), but they can also learn a lot from subject experts in other areas. When you're looking for the next book to help you improve your writing, pick up one or all of these nonfiction books. None are specifically about writing or writers, but they all teach skills every writer can use. Mind Gym: An Athlete's Guide to Inner Excellence by Gary Mack For athletes. mental strength and resilience are just as important as physical training and recovery. The stories, quotes, and anecdotes in this book can apply to anyone who has to set their mind to a long-term project or tough task like writing a novel... even people who can't name a single professional sports team. Supercommunicators: How to Unlock the Secret Language of Connection by Charles Duhigg If your book has dialogue (and it probably does), reading Supercommunicators can help you pinpoint why your characters say what they do and what they hope to accomplish in their communications. When you create dialogue with purpose, that will keep your story moving forward. ![]() Just as important as knowing how to begin your novel is knowing what not to do. No one reads more prospective novel beginnings than literary agents. They’re the ones on the front lines sifting through inboxes and slush piles. And they’re the ones who can tell us which Chapter 1 approaches are overused and cliche, as well as which techniques just plain don’t work. Below, find some feedback from experienced literary agents on what they hate to see in the first pages of a writer’s submission. Avoid these problems and tighten your submission! FALSE BEGINNINGS “I don’t like it when the main character dies at the end of chapter one. Why did I just spend all this time with this character? I feel cheated.” – Cricket Freeman, The August Agency “I dislike opening scenes that you think are real, then the protagonist wakes up. It makes me feel cheated.” – Laurie McLean, Fuse Literary So you've finished your draft. Congratulations! Now take a deep breath—here's where the fun begins.
Before you send your story into the world, make sure it's as polished as it can be. To help you, authors from different genres have shared their insight and wisdom gained over the years. Read below to learn what not to do during revisions as well as what you absolutely should do, and you may even come across a few tips you never thought to consider. 1. Read your work aloud. "You may sound full of yourself, but this is the best way to listen for rhythm—or lack of it, to zone in on klutzy spots and to hear words you may overuse: all, always, just, so, usually, very, perhaps, really… If you repeat words, be intentional about it." - Sally Koslow My guest columns usually discuss the business of writing, but today I’d like to try a thought on writing craft, specifically, a guideline on how to start your novel.
One of the most common reasons why agents and editors stop reading sample pages is that the story starts too slowly. Gone are the days when a book could “get good on page 12.” We also can no longer compare our writing to classic works or even books written 30 years ago that started slow and found marketplace success. Today’s novels — especially debut novels — must grab readers from the first page, the first paragraph, even the first sentence. Despite the fact that the importance of starting strong appears to be well known by most aspiring writers, people still have a hard time with it. I was freelance editing a client’s first 15 pages last year and was dismayed to see that all 15 pages simply described a mystical woman walking across the desert heading for task at a faraway location. There was no question that the writer had talent — this was good, descriptive writing. But it was also boring as hell. 15 pages of essentially nothing happening. That is kind of an extreme example, sure, but this problem — starting too slowly — also exists in smaller, more subtle forms. ![]() Keep moving forward. That is probably the best advice I can give you as you continue toward your writing goals, whatever they may be. Just keep moving forward. Let me take you back a few years to when I was thick in the middle of writing books, and my agent pitching them to publishers. It was a strange year. The first eight months were filled with near misses and small disappointments concerning my writing. Things just weren’t going my way. I vented to those who would listen; my friends and literary agent both told me they could take no more so I started complaining to the dog. (If he listens for five minutes, he gets a treat.) Then, in a span of 45 days in the fall of that year, I had a flood of good writing news. I formally sold the film option and Japanese language rights to my first humor book about garden gnomes. My new freelance editing business was off to an amazing start, and I’ve helped lots of people so far with their queries, synopses, and manuscripts since. I sold a book on writing called Create Your Writer Platform. And I finally sold my second humor book, a fusion of funny dog pictures and political humor called Red Dog / Blue Dog: When Pooches Get Political. So much happened in a span of weeks — all of it amazing news. And I attribute it to one simple thing: I kept moving forward. |
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